I think you already know what I'm going to say but here goes:

The good: I really dig that you're thinking outside of the box instead of being rooted in what people would expect from a fanart. You're using your imagination. I also think you're improving swimmingly with your digital painting. You're thinking about light and shadow and some composition. Kudos.

The bad: You're still not checking yourself on your proportions of anatomy. The guy on the right's forearm should be a spot longer. And... no bueno on the yaoi. But that's more of an opinion.

Keep it up!

I want the event file! *throws a tantrum until she gets it!*

this is beautiful. I really like the design and composition. the school in the BG is a nice detail.

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It's a bit too light for my taste: it's hard to see the guys. My computer screen must be lighter than yours. But I like the idea. And yeah, the anatomy is a bit off. Keep it up! ^^

Grym färg fan, ser ju nästan ut som ett foto taget under vattnet
Eller tja, typ, tyckerallt vatten känns väldigt realistiskt iaf
Sen är det lite gay (`3´ men aja , balla fisk formationer iaf.

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Thanks Spikey ^^ I'm doing my best. And now when I look at it I see that Vergil's arm is too short... I'll have to start being more careful with anatomy!
Thanks for the crits <3

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Thanks, Wazzy Event File will be up today.

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"How do you know I'm mad", said Alice.
"You must be", said the cat "or you wouldn't have come here."

Taking comissions: [link]

You can't see the boys? Maybe you could turn down the brightess of your screen a bit? Thank you!

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"How do you know I'm mad", said Alice.
"You must be", said the cat "or you wouldn't have come here."

Taking comissions: [link]

Tack twinnies <3 ^^

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"You must be", said the cat "or you wouldn't have come here."

Taking comissions: [link]

I can see them, no prob, but they fade into the light. It's rather peculiar, cause everything else on my screen looks fine! ^^

Oj, när jag såg den först så visste jag inte riktigt vad jag skulle tro, men efter ett tag så kom jag på att.. I like it alot.
Färgen och konceptet är något du verkligen lyckats med, känslan på hela bilden känns otroligt... bra. Detta leder mig in på nästa punkt, jag älskar konceptet. Man ser inte mycket sånthär, vad skall man säga, orginellt vilket är ett stort plus.
Tyvär finns det lite drawbacks, jag vet inte riktigt vad som hände med anatomin som du brukar naila så hårt, exempelvis armen på den högra snubben.
Sen tycker jag inte du fått till "undervattnet" effekten på bilden, känns som att det behöver "glänsa" lite mer eller så, för nu ser det nästan ut som att de flyger i luften or something.
Jag ÄLSKAR håret och fiskfjällen är helt otroliga, mer sånthär. Det är ju mumsigt ju

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