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Submitted: July 13, 2008
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Firm Grips p14by =obsessedkitten

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Traditional / Books & Novels

Second page tonight

Now I really need to sleep... I have to wake up early tomorrow to go to work T___T Nooo, don't want to.

I really like Sango here... in both the panels. Kazuo looks a bit weird. The perspective was very difficult for me. The middle panel. Well. I dont know. Makes the page look so dark compared to page 13.

Constructive crits please ^^ I need.

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*TeamLando Jul 14, 2008 Professional Digital Artist

Two good paged, I must say. Nice lookin' and everything. Only thing that bugged me was the stars. Look a bit too detailed and too photo to fit in with your drawing-style o.O
I'da say a black sky and 4-8 stars here and there would've looked better? But I dunno o.o

Cool stuff anyway. Keep at it (oÒ.Ó

=obsessedkitten Jul 14, 2008 Professional Digital Artist

Thanks! Yes, the stars doesn't really fit... but it's not a photo... it was a screentone I had on my computer actually. Maybe I could make the buildings darker to make the stars blend in better?

THank you

Glad you like!!!

*moskitonk Jul 14, 2008

very nice

=obsessedkitten Jul 14, 2008 Professional Digital Artist

Thanks ^^'

~Artspirit Jul 13, 2008

Very nice work. Perspective is always REALLY difficult for me, I'm still learning. But I think you really did great with it. I like the look of the first panel, the way she is sitting in the chair, nice. I also like the whole panel layout.

=obsessedkitten Jul 14, 2008 Professional Digital Artist

Thank you! Yes, perspectives can be dificult. But I prefer to try and fail than to... redesign the whole page just to avoid a certain perspective. I think it's the best way to learn. Or at least I hope so. I'm glad you like it

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